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Extract Essay Plan (Example)

Tuesday, 19 May 2026

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1a - AgreeBoth agree human nature is rational, flexible, and capable of ongoing progress. Education is seen as the vital tool for this growth.Extract 1: Man is a “progressive being, capable of improvement through education.”
Extract 2: Women are “rational creatures” who need “education” to progress.
Reflects rationalism - the belief that humans use logic to improve themselves. Wollstonecraft explicitly rejects the historic view that women are purely emotional.Connects to John Locke’s view that humans are naturally reasonable.Aligns with Mill’s developmental individualism (focusing on human potential).
1b - DisagreeThey differ on what blocks human nature: Extract 1 fears social conformity; Extract 2 attacks structural sexism.Extract 1: Human nature is “not a machine… but a tree” that must grow freely.
Extract 2: Women face a “distortion” by being seen as “females second.”
Extract 1 warns against social tyranny and the “dull conformity” of public opinion.
Extract 2 attacks a patriarchal society that denies women the right to use their minds.
Extract 2 mirrors Betty Friedan (The Feminine Mystique, 1963).Friedan argued post-war social norms trapped women in domestic roles, blocking full personhood.
2a - AgreeBoth agree human nature can only thrive when individuals have personal autonomy.Self-ownership is required for moral growth.Extract 1: Individuals must be “free to develop… through choice and experience.”
Extract 2: Women’s nature is “to be self-governing and virtuous.”
Aligns with foundational equality - everyone is born with equal moral worth. To grow, individuals must be free agents, not the property of husbands or states.Links to negative liberty (freedom from external interference).Reflects Mill’s principle that the individual is sovereign over their own mind and body.
2b - DisagreeThey differ on the primary political solution: Extract 1 wants personal freedom; Extract 2 demands structural justice.Extract 1: Advocates for individual “experiments in living.”
Extract 2: Realized only when treated as “human beings first, and females second.”
Mill assumes baseline legal rights and targets social pressure. Wollstonecraft argues growth is impossible without foundational justice and the rule of law.Extract 1 focuses on liberty; Extract 2 aligns with John Rawls’ focus on equality of opportunity. Rawls argued society must be structured fairly (like under a veil of ignorance) for all to progress.

Ideally, it is best to always add one key thinker. Try and think about what arguments which could be used before reading the extract. Also, make a plan of 3/4 thinkers. Bullet-point a couple of things to say about each thinker. You want to ‘weed’ the thinkers in, i.e., John Locke to support John Stuart Mill .

Provenance

Instead of looking at the characteristics of the author, we look at the date. I.e., when John Stuart Mill was writing, it was a pre-war world in which rights for women did not exist - he would not have considered this, whereas Betty Friedan was in a more modern world in which they were strained but considered.